Ocean on a lit leaf,
between dampening breaths.
Curl slightly in cold, restless repose.
Reflect distant electricity unknown,
or translucent pools like Rilke,
pure liquid until flight.
a world captured inside a wet leaf. i like that it can be restless with lightening or transculent like a pool depending on how you look at it. enjoyed the more "old school" style too.
Thanks Smile and Cecil.. Sometimes ya just get tossed here and there by the cool Autumn breaths. On the AC I read how Rilke inspired Cenacle... read Rilke's 'Going Blind'. The cool breaths filled my window until a pause, and then I noticed the leaf..