utter angst

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HELLiocentric
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utter angst

Post by HELLiocentric »

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Perdida
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Post by Perdida »

fuuuuck! :D
The path to true love isn't always straight.
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Lightning Rod
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Post by Lightning Rod »

this is utter plagiarism
I've read this poem under a half-dozen by-lines
I couldn't say who wrote it
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

The Poet's Eye
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Doreen Peri
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Post by Doreen Peri »

welcome to the f-ing studio ;)
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Post by constantine »

he said the f word.
saw
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Post by saw »

all I've got to say is:

penis penis penis
penis
penis penis
penis penis penis penis
penis, penis ( penis)
******penis

and penis******
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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mnaz
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Post by mnaz »

that's cheap.

and yet the arrangement is striking, in parts.
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Post by stilltrucking »

utter angst
shit
and more shit

so keep on fucking
we need the shit
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mnaz
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Post by mnaz »

shit-and-a-shit-cut
shit shit.

(done to the rhythm of the tune,
"shave and a haircut, two bits")
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