Studio8 - Uniting the Arts

what do you think?

I still miss the bag
there is a bag in drag racing, holds the parachute
and there is a bag in huffing
(plus it rhymes with drag)

I'm not trying to write your poem here, dino
you are quite capable of writing your own (and good ones)
I was just trying to convey to you what my thoughts were on how the piece changed
it's clear that you put more thought into your pieces than many do

well, thanks. i kind of like it. thanks for the help, seriously.

you certainly don't need any help as a poet, dino

I kind of like it too
but I really liked it before

things change as they grow

I can't count the times I've told doreen
"sign it"
when she is doing a painting
and then she adds another layer

they are living things. i come back to them - incidentally or intentionally. they are potentially never finished until the final check out. it's good to see things through different eyes. mine and others.

changed whiff to huff.