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Posted: June 8th, 2009, 5:52 pm
by .Lucy.
You capture the sentiment of poetic frustration perfectly here:
i start freewheeling with words
i bang away at the keys
like one of those wind up monkeys
that beats the drum and clanks the cymbals
until he plays himself out
it's fucked up
but it's the best i can do
Good job!
Doreen, as always, you're a poetic beauty in the field of writing...
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 7:10 pm
by constantine
yes she is, but i'm handsome. thanks lucy.
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:23 pm
by hester_prynne
Indeed, when the wind up thing mysteriously winds itself up and clanks out poetry, you know you're headin for a pulitzer! Hang in there monkey boy!
H

Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:29 pm
by .Lucy.
Sometimes the best music to make is the one we carry within the frenzy of detached thought...
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:39 pm
by constantine
i used to be a lemur, now i'm monkey boy! thanks hester and lucy.
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:42 pm
by hester_prynne
No offense intended MB. I said that with complete endearment.
Besides, arent' lemurs monkeys of a sort?????
H

Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:50 pm
by .Lucy.
Better to be half animal than to be fully human, I say.
Of course, we're all animals, aren't we? We're such self-centered, egotistical beings, we humans.
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:51 pm
by constantine
that's the way i took it! i think lemurs are primates while monkeys are...monkeys! i've always been a monkey boy - i'm not bragging about it, but let's be honest.
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 9:53 pm
by constantine
i'm inclined to agree with you, lucy. we are the worst! no doubt about that - undisputed champs.
Posted: June 8th, 2009, 10:41 pm
by .Lucy.
Indeed!
Being a human is such a drag