Comebacks

Post by **hester_prynne** » July 24th, 2007, 3:44 am

I must be
repositioning
my faithful
boomerang.

Osmosis stupor,
generous blur,
I am slumped in you!

I'm, barely afloat,
adrift in a leap,
no landing strip,
yet in sight.

I'm breathing
in gasps,
exhaling,
grand gusts.

Sure signs,
another comeback,
is spinning my way
again.

Post by **YABYUM** » July 24th, 2007, 8:02 am

I'm, barely afloat,
adrift in a leap,
no landing strip,
yet in sight.

good stanza.
nice.
i mean ice.

Post by **mnaz** » July 29th, 2007, 4:20 am

"don't call it a comeback... I been here for years"...

heard some rapper say that one time, ages ago... LL Cool J, maybe...

Nothin' like that pure renewal and inspiration, tho... the driving force...

the reminder, the trigger...

Post by **WIREMAN** » July 31st, 2007, 9:40 pm

you doobie flyin' thedagirl.............

Totenkopf · Post by **Totenkopf** » September 28th, 2007, 6:19 pm

Osmosis stupor,
generous blur,
I am slumped in you!

Ah yeah that rocks.