we chimes

[emel.scott]

we chimes
each dangling
in solitude

randomly touch
in the grace
of the breeze

then share together
what we alone
will never be

[Perdida]

i hear the touching......lovely emel

[gypsyjoker]

pretty
nice

[joel]

I've been going back through and looking at things I may have missed or filed away in other parts of my mind while I was away...and this is a really nice piece on a day when I woke up to just enough wind and rain to try to shake the chimes. Good read!

[hester_prynne]

...ding...ding...indeed we hear the wind of each other.
Nice.
H

[emel.scott]

Thanks for pulling this out of mothballs as it holds a timeless quality for me (it's the signature on my Gmails)

The last verse has evolved a bit since first penned. I wonder how anyone feels about the revision:

we chimes
each dangling
in solitude

randomly touch
in the grace
of the breeze

to share a chord
one voice alone
can never breathe