return of kiwi

Post by **constantine** » September 4th, 2008, 4:44 pm

o, diminutive one
beak prober
heart of carnivorous desire
emu forsaken
flightless, proud
travel the underbrush
make your way
twixt
auckland and wellington
beak the tuft
of those who offend thee
and let loose
thy mighty
scraaw!

Post by **hester_prynne** » September 5th, 2008, 1:51 am

eeeeeeyawwwwwwwwwwwwoolllllllllllllllllllll
scrawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwk

Indeed.

Constantine, your poems speak to me.
H

Post by **constantine** » September 5th, 2008, 7:48 am

thank you theda for the attention you have shown towards my work. you have made me smile this morning.

Post by **sweetwater** » September 8th, 2008, 1:34 pm

i can't stand criticism myself
the next life shall be better for you!!!!!

i am sure!

genius on your part not mine