beauty bust the beast!

Post by **WIREMAN** » November 1st, 2009, 9:11 am

comes a time
ya need no costume
like nevermore
beauty bust the beast

last night
w/contempt
w/solidity
united she stood firm
temptingly perky
deviliciously pouty
like she was on "i spy"
bust that beast!

ain't no why's
@ my age i am wise
to her blame
old enough to walk
away from the game
beast busted

Post by **Nazz** » November 1st, 2009, 3:28 pm

haha. you devil you.. busted.

Post by **WIREMAN** » November 3rd, 2009, 12:34 pm

thanks for responding mark....it was a jam on jean-luc godard's movie "contempt" w/brigette bardot as contemptress supreme.....

Post by **mnaz** » November 3rd, 2009, 9:47 pm

oh yes, excellent, mark. bardot. a must.

also reminded me of my own halloween night at the bar...

Post by mb » November 4th, 2009, 12:17 pm

never seen the movie,
but that didn't take
anything away from
your clever wordplay
which applies to
so many local and
personal scenarios.

-mb

Post by **WIREMAN** » November 4th, 2009, 12:32 pm

.....thanks mb, i do like playin' with the words and all their various interpretations, sounds and feelings.....the bar be the hub of out-life nazz.......

Post by **SadLuckDame** » November 5th, 2009, 11:50 pm

This was a trip wired, thanks for the ride.

Post by **hester_prynne** » November 7th, 2009, 5:41 am

I read your poem and all of a sudden got this hankering to post a song to it.
Inspiring poem!

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Post by **saw** » November 7th, 2009, 9:15 am

aahh, ms. bardot, she fits the old description, sex kitten, to a tee...
musical as always, brother mark......some women don't need to go to acting class, they just need to be, which is not a knock on her acting,
just a impact statement......

Post by **WIREMAN** » November 7th, 2009, 10:53 am

thanks for reading this one steve....she was a great heartbreaker.....in this film contempt she's amazin'under the direction of godard....she busts the beast who's a writer to boot....thanks hest...jim got me with his words at an early age...."come on, come on and touch me baby!"

Post by **mtmynd** » November 7th, 2009, 7:57 pm

when brigitte was in focus
the world somehow stopped
long enough to catch my breath
no matter what she was in
she was always in with me

Post by **Dave The Dov** » November 8th, 2009, 6:29 am

Yes I see what you mean then!!!!

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Post by **WIREMAN** » November 8th, 2009, 5:24 pm

the temptress....this time the contemptress.....thanks dave....thanks cecil...

Post by **goldenmyst** » November 8th, 2009, 10:23 pm

Contemptresses proliferate at my age. I am a spectator in the game of love now. Cool poem.

John

Post by **WIREMAN** » November 9th, 2009, 12:41 am

.....in a day....in an hour love can turn sour and never be the same....that's life......thanks for reading and responding john....