horrorday for strings

Post by **CranePoole** » November 1st, 2009, 2:39 pm

massive triassic modular moleheads
formerly fashion avenue horrorween favorites
now bargainbinned at mallmarts and smallmarts

mudface bloodface noface
eyegouger earripper armclipper
nosecutter neckslicer brainpiercer

they did the mash
we do the hemodance
bloodfeast preferred
zacherle go home

Post by **hester_prynne** » November 1st, 2009, 3:44 pm

Macabre, grim, the last stanza impeccable.
Really like this,
H

Post by **Doreen Peri** » November 1st, 2009, 3:48 pm

Welcome to the Studio!

Grand entrance! ... musical wordplay

chilling theme!

Post by **CranePoole** » November 3rd, 2009, 9:35 pm

thank you for kind feedback!

Post by **HaroHalola** » November 10th, 2009, 10:48 am

Welcome, CranePoole - Glad you jumped-in @ 1st. base; I ain't no monkee, but ahm a b'liever, but my word ain't the gospel like the pre-contenders afore, two of the few what lay It down for me; home-run, baby, bunting optional - H'H./H.e.m.

Post by **Perdida** » November 10th, 2009, 3:32 pm

Chilling indeed, Welcome1

Enjoyed!

Post by **Terri** » November 12th, 2009, 2:46 pm

this proves halloween is every bit as scary as thanksgiving

I like the slam of the rhythm

and hester's right, the last stanza ends it perfectly

cool, ghoul

Post by **Arcadia** » November 13th, 2009, 7:50 pm

it looks like 5´news here lately!

I like how it sounds in my spanish-english the middle estrofa and the title made me smile. Welcome!!!