Swat

Post by **hester_prynne** » November 7th, 2009, 5:58 am

Got a cigarette?
Spare change?
Real change?

Buzz Buzz Buzz.
I want to
swat, swat, swat.

Downtown,
waitin for a bus,
to get me home.

Post by **saw** » November 7th, 2009, 9:24 am

one cannot know what is going on in the world sitting home in front of the tube watching the faux news..........take a walk downtown, stand on the corner waiting for a bus if you want to feel the pulse of the city,
you have condensed the movement of the street into into 9 little lines quite skillfully........enjoyed, hester

Post by mb » November 7th, 2009, 4:58 pm

ain't no bus without the buzz
in your town and my town too...

-mb

Post by **mtmynd** » November 7th, 2009, 7:46 pm

a tri-ku..?

Post by **K&D** » November 10th, 2009, 1:48 am

*snaps*

Post by **Perdida** » November 10th, 2009, 3:28 pm

grrr nothing like dem damn fllies that invade your space while waitin for a bus.

Cool write Hester.

Enjoyed

Post by **mnaz** » November 11th, 2009, 9:52 pm

swat-ku.

I know what you mean, hes.
I loathe downtown, I really do.

Post by **Terri** » November 12th, 2009, 2:36 pm

Spare change?
Real change?

Buzz Buzz Buzz.

saw said it: this sounds like the buzz-buzz of newsshow talking heads, as well as the street

nicely distilled

Post by **HaroHalola** » November 20th, 2009, 3:53 pm

h-p - YowWow!

Spare change?
Real change?

Most live-out their lives in structured segments, a few lines at a time, hoping for something better at/before the denouement...

Sometimes ya get "cut" & don't feel It 'til the body/mind is into a limp... Sumthin' I don't often do primarily b/c I do not like It done to me (particularly on another network); however, please, in the spirit of reflection of your literature, TY:

- ? -

A Man in homeless-
khaki approached me, "Do ya'
know the Time," he asked?

H.e.m./H'H.
2.27.MMv.