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hester_prynne
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Sweet sweet grind.
Rhythm of enough.
More improvisation room,
and i'm in touch
with the trees again,
romancing bodies of water,
starlites in my eyes.
Freedom.
"I am a victim of society, and, an entertainer"........DW
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yeah baby
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Post by saw »

superb simplicity carries this along to a beautiful conclusion....I dig it !
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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