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Artguy
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Pages 7&8

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A beacon to boredom
Subdivisions
Blue light windows
Order
Civility
A yellow slash across it all
Screaming speed
No punctuation
Don't want to stop
Can't stop
How many railway ties
To San Miguel
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Re: Pages 7&8

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this piece disturbs me, kurt
can't tell you why
just reporting how it makes me feel
when I stand in front of it
something about the business against the intensity of the yellow
like neal, too bright to take
"These words don't make me a poet, these Eyes make me a poet."

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Re: Pages 7&8

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I'm glad it has that effect...Neal et al were very disturbing in the eyes of the blue light windows of suburban America...
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