dionysian ecstasy

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dionysian ecstasy

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let's garden the floor with wine, roll around in passions, cradle each others' worlds and glide into the writhing skin of each others' scents, ride a line of thickening clouds and dance in laughter's chase, you feed me fruits and she'll taste your fingers' juices, we'll watch dawn blush and hide behind trees and watch it lose a battle with disappearing mountain cover, make autumn think it's spring already and spread flowers peppered with cinnamon at the spirits in the hall, frolic into unending bliss for days and days
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Beautiful imagery.
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sounds good to me.....I like the language you use, it paints an escape from the mundane.... or worse.....which can't be a bad thing....was particularly fond of,

"garden the floor with wine"........very original
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Thanks, both, glad you all seemed to enjoy it. Just a fleeting daydream that escaped onto my screen, thought I'd share it
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Yes! We both sing September's song, eh?

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your share is my gain - thanks, neo
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lovely writing. as always :)
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Thanks, guys :D
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Dionysian ecstasy has it all over Apollonian ecstasy.

Some nice imagery
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