calling on an old friend

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saw
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calling on an old friend

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in that ivory tower
that poses as my mind
Professor Reason
smacked his spiked pointer
on my calloused head

a river of self contained
sweetness ran
in streams of awareness
from my ice cold eyes
hesitating on my cheeks

like an unwelcome guest
for a pity-fuck photo-op,
then dripped down
like lost minor chords,
splat, splat, splat, splat

on a worn out pair of shoes
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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stilltrucking
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Re: calling on an old friend

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I wish I was a Lutheran sometimes.

Nice poem, thank you.
theirishsea
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Re: calling on an old friend

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Interesting poem but that word interesting doesn't get at the emotion conveyed. The cause of the emotion is still a mystery to me as a reader though the description of the emotion comes thru.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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