Hai Lights

Post by **sooZen** » February 14th, 2005, 8:24 am

train whistle
far away
familiar

...

dog watching
a favorite past time
presently

...

soft snores
he sleeps
I write haiku

or at least...I think I do. Hah!

SooZen

Post by **sooZen** » February 15th, 2005, 9:08 am

Haiku Forensics:

mouse carcass
behind the fridge-
evidence?

...

smell of death
near the cupboard-
criminal assault

...

mouse shit
on the shelf-
mice play

Post by **sooZen** » February 17th, 2005, 10:03 am

well, in the interests of keeping my 'shit' all in one file cabinet....I will continue here.

Please chime in anytime to my string and please try and make it a 'ku' or at least three lines that don't sound like a broken up sentence...Hah! If you can write a one line haiku, low bow from this gal. 5-7-5 is good practice if needed otherwise let her rip. . .

Spring ku

clouds on the horizon
before the sunrise
pink lining

...

old dog
tail in the air
spring!

...

on the fence
two doves snuggle-
a valentine

Post by **jimboloco** » February 17th, 2005, 4:51 pm

ripe persimmons
orange burn
sweet delight

Post by **jimboloco** » February 17th, 2005, 4:52 pm

late winter
early blossoms
ice storm

Post by **jimboloco** » February 17th, 2005, 4:53 pm

sunlight bright on snow
cold day winter
dead swan

Post by **sooZen** » February 18th, 2005, 6:09 am

Lovely Jimbo...I like 'em all

'See' ya next week when I return....

Peace,
SooZen

Post by **judih** » February 18th, 2005, 6:52 am

red mist horizon
buddha bitch bids us adieu
love that woman's song

Post by **jimboloco** » February 18th, 2005, 9:29 am

red mist horizon
buddha bitch bids us adieu
love that woman's song

I gotta stop

amen

like the banner for today
red dawn
over blue bay

oyu get the last word
ok?

Post by **stilltrucking** » February 18th, 2005, 3:01 pm

grandma's garden
morning gloires against brick
a happy child

Post by **jimboloco** » February 19th, 2005, 6:41 pm

BACKYARD BASKETBALL
SUNNY FEBRUARY
FLORIDA AFTERNOON

Post by **stilltrucking** » February 19th, 2005, 8:15 pm

a backyard fishfry
on rainy warm saturday
home sweet home

a day in nature
I escape cacophony
I can hear the wind
_______________________
the bear burns his brush pile
I stare into the flames
looks good no maggots

6+6 + 5=17 ??

Post by **jimboloco** » February 20th, 2005, 8:19 am

fortunes lost
tempest found
waltz anyway

sunday morning
cats look out
birdsongs

another had bear day
daytona 500
jets zoom low

Post by **stilltrucking** » February 20th, 2005, 11:46 am

elephant waltzing
her trunk wrapped around my waist
brown eyes study me

on a unrelated note

last vagina blues
'there's something in a Sunday"
Makes me feel alone

Post by **jimboloco** » February 20th, 2005, 5:06 pm

lazy labia sunday
afternoon snooze
quiet dream