Driving home

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Artguy
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Driving home

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Driving Home

A transparent moon rising
Perched in cerulean blue above
High to my aching left
Slow through my windshield
Window open wide to September
Summers' back turned
Cool Canadian wind
Whispers on my ragged face
Rusty ol truck
And I too
Together we move along
Beneath the rising day time moon
The crow is happy
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cool 8)
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dadio
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Finely put bang on the nail 8)
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sweet
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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