The last sound in
to this uncertain wobble
of earth, even if life
isn't so beautiful,
could be your prayer,
my friend
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Re: Unused Cemetery
you packed so much meaning and heart into only a few lines. wow...well done!
"From the sudden invasion of a mind not my own in the world. This I will record. For whom? For m y s e l f, beyond denial and beyond indifference." - Philip Lamantia
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I agree with whoaisme.
Such concise writing for an abundance of rich imagery and layers of meaning.
Such concise writing for an abundance of rich imagery and layers of meaning.
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whoaisme:
Thank you. I am in love w/brevity. Sometimes.
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Thank you. I am in love w/brevity. Sometimes.
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Thanks, Doreen. Appreciate it.
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