the broken part
the heart
the spine was so inclined
to rub the wrong way
electric impulses shorting out
made it hard not to shout
the sky
held still in the waters of the soul
bone on bone
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reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: bone on bone
Likea likea....everything about this...the length, the sense of wonder in it 
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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Thank you-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
Re: bone on bone
Very good. Dostoyevskian in spirit. Love it
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Re: bone on bone
sweet
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---