Prisoners

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the mingo
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Prisoners

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hot humid breeze
wildflowers along the river
bend with it

leaves of the trees
raise with its passage
- a brief conversation -
that does nothing to cool
in the heavy air

four white butterflies
dance over the river

dance together over & up the road

- disappearing to distance
prisoners of hope -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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for a hot second i watched 3 yellow butterflies from the train dancing the other day, wondering how long do they survive? 8)
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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scene of summer....could feel the warm breeze.... 8)
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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i really liked this one-
you would think we were along the same river- -
beautiful-
reason is over rated, as is logic and common sense-i much prefer the passions of a crazy old woman, cats and dogs and jungle foliage- tropic rain-and a defined sense of who brings the stars up at night and the sun up in the morning---
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WIREMAN wrote:for a hot second i watched 3 yellow butterflies from the train dancing the other day, wondering how long do they survive? 8)
Thx for reading, Wireman - appreciate it
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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saw wrote:scene of summer....could feel the warm breeze.... 8)
yeah it is - before the end of August the white butterflies in the poem will be long gone -
Thx for reading, saw -
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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creativesoul wrote:i really liked this one-
you would think we were along the same river- -
beautiful-
Thx for reading, Jana - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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