The trouble is...

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Doreen Peri
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The trouble is
fire on the horizon.

A new possibility
rising from behind
the mountain.

What mountain?
We have no mountain here!
That's exactly right.
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what is that we think we see...nice to read you, doreen...
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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A real brain teaser
a lot said with little 8)
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we sit
we ponder
what we?
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8) Good capture.
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The trouble is,
I knew what it meant
when I wrote it.
Now, I'm puzzled by it.

:)
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nature's mountain
keep fires away
mountains we create
not so much
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beekay,

Yeah, maybe that was what it was about. A mountain I created that wasn't really there. I can be my own worst enemy.
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Good to see you posting again D - 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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I wrote a poem in my head last night. It was fabulous! Best writing I've ever not written! .... This wasn't it. (Obviously)

One day, mingo... one day, I hope to write again ... I miss writing.
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I sure you do - you once wielded wit as a sword and wicked in your hand it was ... miss that 8)
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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