Leaf

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the mingo
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Leaf

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if a leaf
falls off a houseplant
to the floor
don't touch it
leave it there
for as many days
as it takes
to make
you cry
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
saw
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Joined: May 23rd, 2008, 7:32 am
Location: B'more, Maryland

Re: Leaf

Post by saw »

the art of brevity...on display
good metaphor for life...so easy to picture the message
as reality would have it....



as an aside I take all the fallen leaves
and place them back in the pot to fertilize
which can also have a very visual impact
as one considers the cycles of life
the death of empathy is the birth of barbarism
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