It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

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the mingo
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It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

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the ghosts stayed late
to the passing
of the first spring thunderstorm

to the sound of raindrops
fading in the night
Doll, you may have found a place of rest but I'm still on the trail.
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mnaz
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Re: It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

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ghosts and passing storms...
theirishsea
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Re: It Wouldn't Have Lasted Anyways

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Simple and it lingers in the imagination. Nice one.
The Irish Sea Is Always In Turmoil, Even When Calm.
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