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wylde
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pleasure chests

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.

vagabond vapid skies
enthral

cotton cutlass euphonic
sprawls

digger diamond and slewty
sapphire

spindle upon ears of india rubber
desire

flotsam plank and hooks of
ticks

tock breathless blood into
needled pricks

penchant pirates pilfer penzance
as pleasure chests canonize
thighs

fired in diffidence

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Post by judih »

don't know whether to put the pieces together
or dance around it in a jig

parallel constructions

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Post by wylde »

...definitely for dancing away...always...jus so long that isnt a jig sore...

parallel constructions....? for sure there is a conduit of energies moving in both directions...


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Post by mtmynd »

a strong parallel to your 69th post and context

it's the sound
it's the meter
it's complete
it's wylde
it's good
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Post by wylde »

.thanks.
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Post by tinkerjack »

just a mind fuk for me

thanks, I needed that.
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Post by wylde »

*offers you a smoke*

..it was good for me...


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Post by WIREMAN »

......sounds like a great place to be.......

..........or not to be.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
me I feel like I'm becoming some kinda Kung fu t.v. Priest.....
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