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[YABYUM]

react his selfless ways did say
all along broadning skies
rumble should fathom deep his exsistence
or at least our cries
and why?

utopian and he waits for it
under the bottom of a sea

[joel]

one of the most striking pieces i have read in a while--and that's placing my amazement over some pretty amazing pieces. whatever quality calls to me in this, i don't know; i could barely stop rereading though.

[stilltrucking]

I keep reaching for meanings, on some level of consciousness it rings my gong, but the meaning escapes me, it tantalizes me.

I know what it means, but I just cant say. Man that was brilliant, in my humble opinion.



Thanks yabyum

"A poem should not mean, but be."